Interesting.
First of all, those who vote lowly do not understand what this is.
For those who do not understand, this is a unique new concept of game wherein you, the player, follow a storyline and manipulate it where there are multiple branches of possible continuations to the story. These continuations change the direction of the story, literally and figuratively, to entertain the player, who tries to find a favorable outcome to the various situations that the hero of the story is involved with.
To the author, good job in creating a very original concept for a game. I misunderstood this game for some time; I thought that the actual game was an introduction and that it could not be interacted with. After reaching the conclusion and playing again, I noticed that I could pick between two branches of text. While this is a unique approach to gameplay, it poses several disadvantages. Since it lacks clear-cut instruction, it would probably confuse people while the game is in progress. I speak from experience.
In short. Good job. There is room for improvement.